Recount Writing - At aunt's house

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.

25 /07/ 17.

At aunty’s house.

On last Saturday afternoon I  went to my aunt's house with my family to have a BBQ in Kaikohe.  When we got there I played with my cousin. I saw my aunty and uncle. I felt excited.  I said to my cousin, “What should we play? I think we should play hide and go seek? I went by the tree and it took the longest time for my cousin to find me. I felt outstanding when I was playing with my cousin. The next thing we did was play long ball. We had a great game. After that our  family had a BBQ. It was amazing. I said to myself, “This is yummy.” Last I said to my cousins, “Should we play and Sonny said, “Yes, what should we play?”

Then we decided to play long ball.

I really enjoyed my day with my family.

Recount Writing-At Soccer

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You can also add interesting words, talking, similes, feelings and thoughts.

I went to soccer

On Thursday morning I went to soccer in Kaikohe to have fun. I went with Whaea Lana, Mason and Litesha.

I felt excited when I went there.

When we got to soccer I saw lots of people. I said, “This it fun VJ.” VJ said, “Yes this is fun, Ariaana.”

The first thing I did was practice kicking the soccer ball around the field. I felt confident in soccer practice.

Next I was talking with my team. We had a meeting. I felt pumped.

After that we started to play our game. I felt jolly when we started the game.

Later on me and my team had lunch. I said to myself, “MMM this is yummy.”

Finally me and my team had 4 games. On the first game we lost. In the next game we lost. In the other game we lost. But in the last game we won. I felt terrific. I thought the whole was great day.

Te Reo Maori

I am learning to give and follow instructions in Te Reo Maori

Toku Pepeha

I have been learning to say my Pepeha with confidence.

Term 2 goal setting

I have achieved all of my goals this term. 

I feel stupendous and proud of myself.