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I went to soccer
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On Thursday morning I went to soccer in Kaikohe to have fun. I went with Whaea Lana, Mason and Litesha.
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I felt excited when I went there.
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When we got to soccer I saw lots of people.
I said, “This it fun VJ.” VJ said, “Yes this is fun, Ariaana.”
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The first thing I did was practice kicking the soccer ball around the field.
I felt confident in soccer practice.
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Next I was talking with my team. We had a meeting.
I felt pumped.
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After that we started to play our game.
I felt jolly when we started the game.
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Later on me and my team had lunch.
I said to myself, “MMM this is yummy.”
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Finally me and my team had 4 games. On the first game we lost. In the next game we lost. In the other game we lost. But in the last game we won. I felt terrific.
I thought the whole was great day.
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