My best day Ever.

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29.04.19

My Best Day Ever.

Last Sunday me and my aunty went to Kerikeri  on the car to

the easter egg hunt there were games to play.

It looked amazing there were lots of people there.

First I went to the bouncy castle there were eight bouncy castles
everything was free.

There were sausage sizzles, cotton candy,face paint,drawing,
cupcakes,chocolate cakes and Ice cream. Everything was cool!

After that we had a easter egg hunt the easter egg were lots
of easter and  everyone has to get a plastic bag and find the
egg they were delicious I got a enormous easter egg.

Later on I saw Helam,Utah,Kira,Whetu and Jonas they were
there too. Me and my aunty got the most chocolate eggs my
aunty went to every game so then my bag was heavy
it had too much chocolate in it.

So my aunty put it in her t-shirt.

Finally we went to the  cotton candy there

was a big line that we had to wait for 2 hours

and the cotton candy was huge as huge as an

elephant it was so yummy. The cotton candy  

was too big for my mouth.I went to play with Utah

on the bouncy castle, I was getting tired so

I went on the merry go round.  I went to go to paint

a butterfly and a little easter egg it looked amazing

while I was there I said to Vj and Rawiri

‘’hi what are you doing’’ they said ‘’were going to the park’’

I said  ‘’ooh ok’’ then this man was handing out little easter

egg there were heaps of little chocolate eggs so we got a

handful my aunty  had more than me so I asked the man

‘’can have more chocolate egg’’ he said ‘’yes you can’’

so I got more egg than she said ooh man you are a cheater

I said no I ain't  my aunty went to go to get Mcdonalds while

I get some more easter egg from the game

when she got back she had yummy kai I said ‘’thank you for

bring me here you are the best in the world.’’

I was happy  I enjoyed my day.