My writing mark

Ideas	S&L	organisation	vocab	S&S	Punctuation	Spelling	Total
4	4	5	4	5	4	6	32 4p

Ideas a 4 because I have some information. 

Structure & Language 4 is that because it may be well developed and all structured.

Organisation 5 is that I organise in basic paragraphs.
Vocabulary:4 is that I use a range of words and phrases.

Sentence Structure:5 is that I used mostly grammatically correct.

Punctuation: 4 is because I mostly use full stops and capital letters correctly.

Spelling: 6 is that I didn't make any mistakes