Explanation Writing;Structure

WALT identify the structure of explain writing.

Plastic pollution is killing sea life,seabirds and plants of the ocean.
It’s causing make problem for our world.

What can be done to solve the plastic pollution problem?

One thing can be done to solve the plastic pollution problem is using less plastic
packaging. Instead of buying stuff from the shop. People are shopping for big
bag’s or big contans .
They are sent the plastic to the landfill and not helping our world.

Another thing can be done to solve the plastic pollution problem is
people are using cottons bag. Instead of plastics bag. So our world haves
no plastic bags.

Lastly what’s being done to solve the plastic pollution
problem is that many people are reclining their rubbish to sent
to the factories to make shoes,clothes and furniture.

So In conclusion  plastic is everywhere plastic kills animals.

So the world has to be clean everyday.

Highlight the structural features of your text with the following colours.

	Beginning/Introduction.
	Body-1st paragraph- Main idea.
	Body - 2nd paragraph - Supporting detail.
	Body - 3rd paragraph - Supporting detail.
	Conclusion.

Explanation Writing:My self-assessment.

WALT use the writing rubric to assess our writing.

Plastic pollution is killing sea life,seabirds and plants of the ocean.
It’s causing make problem for our world.

What can be done to solve the plastic pollution problem?

One thing can be done to solve the plastic pollution problem is using less
plastic packaging. Instead of buying stuff from the shop. People are shopping
for big bag’s or big contans . They are sent the plastic to the landfill and not
helping our world.

Another thing can be done to solve the plastic pollution problem is people are
using cottons bag. Instead of plastics bag. So our world haves no plastic bags.

Lastly what’s being done to solve the plastic pollution problem is that many
people are reclining their rubbish to sent to the factories to make shoes,
clothes and furniture.

So In conclusion  plastic is everywhere plastic kills animals.

So the world has to be clean everyday.

Explanation Writing:Language.

WALT identify some language features of explain writing.

Plastic pollution is killing sea life,seabirds and plants of the ocean. It’s causing
make problem for our world.

What can be done to solve the plastic pollution problem?

One thing can be done to solve the plastic pollution problem is using less plastic
packaging. Instead of buying stuff from the shop. People are shopping for big
bag’s or big contans .
They are sent the plastic to the landfill and not helping our world.

Another thing can be done to solve the plastic pollution problem is people are
using cottons bag. Instead of plastics bag. So our world haves no plastic bags.

Lastly what’s being done to solve the plastic pollution problem is that many
people are reclining their rubbish to sent to the factories to make shoes,clothes
and furniture.

So In conclusion  plastic is everywhere plastic kills animals.

So then the  world has to be clean everyday.

Highlight the language features of your text with the following colours.

	Precise topic words
	Conjunctions-because, then, so
	Cause and effect words-so, because, as a result of
	Action words.

Term 4 Goal setting.

Here is my Term 4 Goal Setting.

Recount Writing- In Christchurch

WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount
Writing.

In Christchurch

On Wednesday me and my family travelled to Christchurch. We
were going to Christchurch for my aunty’s wedding. I had a
huge smile on my face when I went to Christchurch.

First drove to Auckland airport to go on a plane to Christchurch.
It was the first time I had ever been in a plane. It was amazing
on the plane.

Next we landed in Christchurch. We walked out of the plane
and got our bags. We waited for the van. When the van came,
my papa drove us to a motel in Christchurch. Me, my papa
and nan went in our motel. There were 3 beds and 1 tv. We
had a barbecue for dinner. It was yummy.

The next day we travelled in the van to see Mount Cook. We
saw lots of snow on the mountain. I was excited because it
was the first time I saw snow.

Then me and my friends were playing hide and go seek in
the dark. I was in and I said to my cousin, “Do you want
to play?” He said, “Yes.” I counted to 30 and I found my friend
Isabella and my cousin’s Jayden and Teauha.

After that me and my friend went to look at the bunnies and
rabbits. My cousin found a bunny. The bunny was cute. I felt
I was the happiest in the world.