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Tuesday, November 12, 2019

Cinquains

we have been learning about Cinquains here it is:

Sparks in the Sky Onomatopoeia

we have been learning about Sparks in the Sky Onomatopoeia here it is:

Thursday, October 31, 2019

christmas facts

what we have been learning today? will we have been learning about Christmas and facts about christmas.

Tuesday, September 3, 2019

Lords prayer.

WALT read the lords prayer so I can learn it.
E tō mātou i te rangi
(Our Parent in the spirit world)

Kia tapu tou Ingoa
(Scared is your Name)

Kia tae mai tou rangatira-tanga.
(Bring us Your Chiefly rule)

Kia meatia tau e pai ai
(May it happen in the way that is to You, good)

ki runga i te whenua,
(may it happen on earth)

kia rite ano ki to te rangi.
(In the same way as in spirit world)

Homai ki a mātou aianei
(Give us now)

he taro mā mātou mo tēnei ra.
(The food we need this day)

Murua o mātou hara
(Strip us of sins);


Me mātou hoki e muru nei
(Give us back what we have lost)

i o te hunga e hara ana ki a mātou.
(Our Parent in the spirit world)

Aua hoki mātou e kawea kia whaka-waia;
(Do not lead us into temptation);

Engari whaka-orangia mātou, i te kino:
(May we be whole,away from things evil);


Nou hoki te rangatira-tanga,
(Through your chiefly position,is)

te kaha,
(the power)

me te  kororia,
(and the glory).

Ake, ake, ake.
(Forever and ever

Āmine.

(Amen)


Friday, August 30, 2019

Thursday, August 22, 2019

My chair stem challenge.

this is my paper chair here it is.
Student Lab Sheet: Paper Chair Challenge                    
My Questions?




Were you successful in the challenge? Why? No because we didn't
have time left to make my paper chair.


What was the most difficult part of the challenge? The most difficult
part was I wasn’t listening.


What was the best idea you came up with during this challenge? 
My best was making it stand but I didn't make one.


Did your paper chair work? Why or Why not? No Because
I was daydreaming and not doing my work. What type of chair design
did you use? Why?I didn't make my chair because I didn't get my work
done.


What did you learn about construction and engineering during this
challenge?
I learnt to type faster and to listen to instruction.

Reading about Usain Bolt.

I been learning about Usain Bolt here it is.

I have been mark explain writing.

WALT use rubric to mark a piece of writing.
Success criteria: I will use the rubric to mark then write why I gave it to that point.
I will add a total of point  and gave it a level.
In our  Tautoro School  we have so many new students who have enrolled  in our school.
Because of the new enrollments every time we have a  powhiri or assembly we always get squashed,
and we feel really uncomfortable. So the facility that is needed in Tautoro School  is a new hall.
Why do we need a hall?

First a  hall is needed by Tautoro School because when we have new students enrolling in our school,
every new child needs  a powhiri. There are more students enrolling into our school every week and
we are feeling really squashed in our small library.  If we had a hall our manuhiri would feel more
comfortable and they would be able to shake everybody's hands without pushing past students and
then they would feel very welcomed, comfortable and feel more relaxed. 

Secondly: if we had a community hall we would also be able to play sports inside.   If it was raining
or if it became too hot. Then we wouldn't be missing out on our fitness and fitness  makes you feel
good and it exercises your brain. And this would help students to concentrate more in class.

Another reason why we need a hall is so that we could get a kitchen built in the hall then we would be
able to have technology at our school instead of travelling to town to use another school's kitchen. 
We would be able to learn how to cook and bake and then we would be able to help our whanau cook
and bake at home.


Last of all we need  a hall because our community would be able to use the hall in the weekend
which will bring  all our local communities together for meetings or gala days.

In conclusion, I strongly believe we need a community hall at our school because our 
Tautoro school community is growing every week with new students enrolling into our school.
It is important  that we have a new hall so that we won't be squashed and then we would feel
comfortable and then we would listen better because we would all feel relaxed.
If we don't have a hall we will always feel squashed and we will not have enough room in
our teeny library for new students.


                                 Score     Reasons why you have given this mark
Ideas
5
Because it has lots of ideas that connects.
Structure Language
4
She has all of her structure. 
Organisation
4
She put her ideas into groups.
Vocabulary
4
She uses a range of words  and phrases that are mostly grammatically
correct.
Sentence Structure
5
She can write a variety of sentences.
Punctuation 
5
She can use the correct sentence in punctuation.
Spelling
5
She spelt all her words correctly.
Total
32
4p

Friday, August 2, 2019

Ihumatao



We have been learning about Ihumatao and the
land issue.
We had to choose a side: Maori OR Settler and
write how it would of been at the time.
Here is mine:


“Give me you land or go to jail” I shouted. I stood staring at
them,I felt proud as I glided across the land.
You native people don't deserve this land. 
I scanned around slowly.
I could see a group of Maori men slapping their legs and
throwing their arms in the air. 
I could hear the Maori men stomping the ground angrily.

I could smell the wet brown mud on the ground.

Friday, May 3, 2019

My best day Ever.

WALT use the correct structure for recount
Success Criteria:
I will have a title
I will have a title
I will have orientation(who what where when how)
I will have orientation(who what where when how)
I talked about how I feel.


29.04.19


My Best Day Ever.


Last Sunday me and my aunty went to Kerikeri  on the car to
the easter egg hunt there were games to play.
It looked amazing there were lots of people there.


First I went to the bouncy castle there were eight bouncy castles
everything was free.
There were sausage sizzles, cotton candy,face paint,drawing,
cupcakes,chocolate cakes and Ice cream. Everything was cool!


After that we had a easter egg hunt the easter egg were lots
of easter and  everyone has to get a plastic bag and find the
egg they were delicious I got a enormous easter egg.


Later on I saw Helam,Utah,Kira,Whetu and Jonas they were
there too. Me and my aunty got the most chocolate eggs my
aunty went to every game so then my bag was heavy
it had too much chocolate in it.
So my aunty put it in her t-shirt.


Finally we went to the  cotton candy there
was a big line that we had to wait for 2 hours
and the cotton candy was huge as huge as an
elephant it was so yummy. The cotton candy  
was too big for my mouth.I went to play with Utah
on the bouncy castle, I was getting tired so
I went on the merry go round.  I went to go to paint
a butterfly and a little easter egg it looked amazing
while I was there I said to Vj and Rawiri
‘’hi what are you doing’’ they said ‘’were going to the park’’
I said  ‘’ooh ok’’ then this man was handing out little easter
egg there were heaps of little chocolate eggs so we got a
handful my aunty  had more than me so I asked the man
‘’can have more chocolate egg’’ he said ‘’yes you can’’
so I got more egg than she said ooh man you are a cheater
I said no I ain't  my aunty went to go to get Mcdonalds while
I get some more easter egg from the game
when she got back she had yummy kai I said ‘’thank you for
bring me here you are the best in the world.’’

I was happy  I enjoyed my day.