My Friendship poster.

WALT use information from the text to create a poster.

Recount Writing-At the beach

WALT use 'show don't tell'to spice up our writing.

25.07.18

At the beach

On a hot beautiful Monday afternoon me and my family
went to the beach in Paihia. First I asked
my dad if we could pick Sonny, Sweyde and
Shilaine up. Dad said yes. So we picked them up and we went
to the beach. The smile on my face was as big as the sun.

When we got to the beach the first thing me, Myer and Shilaine
did was to make a sandcastle.It was as tall as the Shilaine.

After that me, Sonny and Cyprus went to have a swim.
The water was cold as the ice. My body was
shaking and my teeth were chattering. “Time to get out,” I said.

Then we had a sand fight but Shilaine and Myer didn't
want to play with us because they said that they didn’t want to

sand to get in their clothes.

Later on me, Shilaine and Myer were doing
cartwheels on the sand.
My hands was getting sore so I stopped.

Finally me, Cyprus, Sonny and Sweyde had a race.
I was fast as a racing car.
Sonny came first. Sweyde came second,
I came third and Cyprus came last.  
I said to my mum and dad,
“Thank you for taking us to the beach.
It was the best day ever.”

Learning Wall- Term 2 2018

Matariki Star

Here is my Matariki Star.

Cinquain Poem

I wrote this cinquain poem about Stars.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing

I think we should brush our teeth everyday.

Firstly I think we should brush our teeth everyday so
that our teeth can smell nice.

If you are not brushing your teeth then they will smell bad.
Have you smelt
someone with bad breath? Pooh.

Another reason why I think we should brush our teeth
everyday is to get rid of the strep
A bug from your mouth and your throat.

If you don’t brush your teeth the strep A bug might get into
your throat  and make you very sick.

Lastly I think we should brush our teeth everyday
so that our teeth will not get rotten.

When you brush your teeth the germs get brushed
away and your teeth are nice and clean.

So that’s why I think we should brush our teeth everyday.

Do you agree with me?

My reading level-Term 2 2018

This is a Level 24 text.

I am reading at my expected level.

My speech - Term 2 2018.

WALT: speak clearly with good volume and pace.