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Friday, July 27, 2018

Recount Writing-At the beach

WALT use 'show don't tell'to spice up our writing.
25.07.18
At the beach
On a hot beautiful Monday afternoon me and my family
went to the beach in Paihia. First I asked
my dad if we could pick Sonny, Sweyde and
Shilaine up. Dad said yes. So we picked them up and we went
to the beach. The smile on my face was as big as the sun.
When we got to the beach the first thing me, Myer and Shilaine
did was to make a sandcastle.It was as tall as the Shilaine.
After that me, Sonny and Cyprus went to have a swim.
The water was cold as the ice. My body was
shaking and my teeth were chattering. “Time to get out,” I said.
Then we had a sand fight but Shilaine and Myer didn't
want to play with us because they said that they didn’t want to
sand to get in their clothes.
Later on me, Shilaine and Myer were doing
cartwheels on the sand.
My hands was getting sore so I stopped.
Finally me, Cyprus, Sonny and Sweyde had a race.
I was fast as a racing car.
Sonny came first. Sweyde came second,
I came third and Cyprus came last.  
I said to my mum and dad,
“Thank you for taking us to the beach.
It was the best day ever.

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