The old lady

 Title: The old lady

WALT:write a character description.  

As I glanced at myself in the mirror, I saw myself with no proper home,an old purple scarf, my little glasses and a green beanie with a pink pompom on top. I was glazing in the boxes. I could see a ripped old umbrella. I had my trolley and put my umbrella in it. I establish a rusty brown can. I did the best I could. I launched four paper birds. After days of scavenging for things to put in my trolley, inside of the car I smelt the Christmas tree and laid down. Suddenly the chair broke and I heard something I've never heard before. I had excitement and feelings that this will be great. I opened the boxes and saw a remarkably, stunning, beautiful, diamond ring. it filled my heart with sunshine and rainbows. I used the things that I set up and it felt like the real world. I had a happy smile on my face when I went to sleep.

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Land Pollution

 WALT: use structure and language effectively.

Success Criteria: My writing is structured appropriately. 

Title:Land Pollution

Definition:Land is the contamination of recycling for our land and that it occurs when waste is not disposed properly. 

My problem:Things made out of rubbish and about the land pollution.

Have you ever done things with rubbish? Because if you have then you should change this to change. 

Five facts that I know about land pollution 

It damages our world, There are lots of causes about pollution, land pollution is a destruction, Pollution is all over the world, There is 139.6 million tons of waste sent to the landfill in the U.S every year. 

Earliest, how our land pollution does to not help our world is by throwing rubbish outdoors and by throwing rubbish everywhere.

Also, how we can make things out of rubbish and reduce the rubbish is that there are tools all over the world that can make rubbish into items reusable stuff like a playground, milk bottles,bendy bottles and objects that are made out of soft.

In conclusion, what things do to hurt our land is that human beings are not picking their own rubbish and just leaving their rubbish on the ground they don’t even care if there are people or animals die.

Cage chcikens

 WALT: use structure and language for explain writing 

                    Caged Chickens

Definition:Chickens are stunning feathered animals. Chickens love to walk around outside and to play. However, caged chickens are treated differently. They are trapped inside all day and all night with no space to move around. Just imagine thousands and thousands of hens in a chicken farm laying thousands of eggs all day for people to eat. This is a big problem for our environment and the world.

Body to explain the problem and the solution.

Cage chickens affect our environment. 1. Contamination of our water and soil. When the caged chickens food mixes with the ingredients like poop, dry skin, their feathers, water and soil and then the farms wash away and it eventually reaches the waterways.

Imagine if lots of packing from eggs are sent to shops. There are millions of eggs that have packing. The production per eggs from these large chicken

 farms have negative affects on nature such as plastic packing, and contamination of the water and earth.

Conclusion.

Since the 1980s there are people that are looking for finer mix to lower the crash on our nature. There is a children's group ‘be a defend for chickens.Plastic is one of there on high slayer of our seas and the wild animals out there. 

Pollution

 

WALT:describe an environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on our world.

Title: Pollution

Definition: Pollution is something introduced into the environment that is dirty, unclean or has a harmful effect to our land. 

The problem: How pollution is hurting our land and about pollution.

How much money to dump a black rubbish bag?

To dump a rubbish bag at the dump it will cost $3.

Firstly, Pollution is about rubbish that kills sea animals and it may kill human beings because the old rubbish can spread in the air and poison things.

Next thing, Pollution takes 1000 years to decompose. 

Another thing, the presence in or introduction into the environment of a substance which has harmful or poisonous effects. 

After that, did you know that some of the people dump their rubbish by the sea? They don’t even care if the sea animals die. 

Pollution is a problem because people throw rubbish out the window and can cause damage. 

Next, why pollution is a problem. Pollution is the biggest problem on the earth and the most dangerous, as it destroys the earth and its original nature ends up destroying ourselves. 

Then people cut down trees to make houses and if we had no trees then we wouldn't have oxygen to breath. 

Many people are recycling their rubbish to be sent to the factories to make shoes,clothes and furniture.

Lastly what people have been doing by not helping the world is that pollution has killed over three million children that are under five years old.

How we can solve this problem is that we have to make this stop and that hoping people will not throw rubbish out windows and that it won’t kill human beings.

So in conclusion, these problems are not really great that happen around the world so I think that we should get this over with and not do it. 

My Learning Wall

The impact of climate change in Aotearoa

 Title: The impact of climate change in Aotearoa.

We are learning to explain how climate change affects our environment in Aotearoa.

I will explain how climate change is affecting Aotearoa. What is climate change? Climate change is when the weather changes lots. This could affect our environment by getting too hot or cold. I will be explaining climate change and how the weather, energy, atmosphere, animals and  plants, and water are affected or contribute to the effects of climate change.

Firstly, This is a big problem because climate change is already hurting Aotearoa because of the things that are making people or people themselves to do it. For example, if the fire goes through your lungs there would not be much oxygen for you to breathe then you might survive but some didn’t. By burning rubbish it can harm people because it hurts people if you are little kids. I feel that we should really stop this by using things that don't hurt people. 

Secondly, energy  is a problem because when we burn oil, gas and all those ideas that hurt us. How can we solve the solution for energy? We can stop burning the oil and things that could burn the world. For example, if the fire goes through your lungs there would not be much oxygen for you to breathe then you might survive but some didn’t. I think this because this will make people change and not do it.

Next, water is a big problem because four percent more water for every 1ºF increases  temperature.  How we can solve this solution for water is that the earth's  water is found and how

that is changing over time. For example, if the sun heats up the temperature goes

higher and higher then we will have no water, then we will be on water restriction,

then there will be no fish to clean up the ocean to swim in because the fishes will die

and they won’t be fresh to eat. I feel amazed that these things happened in Aotearoa. 

Plants are a large trouble because high temperatures can be dangerous to our world by the hot tan that is out there. How we do this solution for Plants is we will slowly stop climate change. For example, if the sun has a high temperature then the plants will die and we will not be able to eat the fresh plants that are food. I feel bad because there is no way to stop this.

Then, the atmosphere is a problem because the atmosphere is the same as air pollution. How we can solve this big problem for the atmosphere is by stopping people by burning big things that can destroy our world. For example, the atmosphere goes through the air and pollutes the air. I feel that this pollution thing has happened everywhere.

Finally, weather for climate change is a problem because it is a mode weather effect in places over 30 years. This is how the problem for the weather is that the weather is the same as climate so we should stop it by slowing it up. For example, if the weather changes like climate change because it's the same. I think this because so people can see this.

In conclusion, I have just identified what climate change means and what I know about how the weather, energy, atmosphere, animals and  plants, and water are affected or contribute to the effects of climate change. Climate change is dangerous for people and animals from the weather.I have a feeling that we will never stop this because the weather changes itself.