I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.
25 /07/ 17.
At aunty’s house.
On last Saturday afternoon I went to my aunt's house with my family to have a BBQ in Kaikohe. When we got there I played with my cousin. I saw my aunty and uncle. I felt excited. I said to my cousin, “What should we play? I think we should play hide and go seek? I went by the tree and it took the longest time for my cousin to find me. I felt outstanding when I was playing with my cousin. The next thing we did was play long ball. We had a great game. After that our family had a BBQ. It was amazing. I said to myself, “This is yummy.” Last I said to my cousins, “Should we play and Sonny said, “Yes, what should we play?”
Then we decided to play long ball.
I really enjoyed my day with my family.
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